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@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ div(class="home-rows")
       div(class="text-block l-pad-top-2")
         h3(class="text-headline") Loved by Millions
         p(class="text-body").
-          Supports you from your first scrappy launch all the way through global deployment -- Angular brings you the scaling infrastructure and techniques that support Google's largest applications.
+          From prototype through global deployment, Angular delivers the productivity and scalable infrastructure that supports Google's largest applications.
     div(class="promo-img-container promo-4")
       div
         img(src="resources/images/home/loved-by-millions.png")